Someone wrote in [personal profile] fantasticbeasts_kinkmeme 2016-12-28 03:15 pm (UTC)

Re: fill: "to honor and obey" (original!Graves/fem!Credence, part 6/6)

This is such a wonderful fill, I love that you managed to write something that's finally very sweet, even though neither character is at the beginning? It feels like they're finding something within themselves as well as in each other and I love that a lot... fem!Credence is perfect, and I guess we're all Queenie here hahahaha. I love the way you write Graves - love that he's so fleshed out and that your writing style allows us to perceive so much about a character who isn't into talking about his feelings, for many reasons, and who isn't the POV. Absolutely loved the part about where Grindelwald kept him locked in and the thing about his sister - and Modesty! I'm glad Credence will be allowed to contact her! I loved that Graves was in the back of his mind wondering if Credence had insisted on marrying him because of Grindelwald, and that despite this suspicion he nonetheless allowed her this possible selfishness by going along with it anyway. Okay I'll stop now because if I keep talking about the things I loved, I'll just write a detailed summary of everything that happens in the fic hahahaha. Anyway, it was really wonderful and lovely to read something with Credence developing in a positive way, with something so potentially traumatic and motivated by such despair coming out good in the end. Oh yeah also, the pretext - the marriage magic - def seemed authentic and something that would exist in Rowling's universer which was pretty cool tbh. I'm generally into horrible kinks with Graves ships but rn I'm just wishing this couple lots and lots of satisfying oral sex and healing and growing fondness and regard for each other :')

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