I nominate Theseus for "brother of the year" award. Or "this century". I loved your Newt in this chapter, but I feel like I must compliment Theseus too, because he cares so much about Newt. He wants the best for him, he doesn't want to force him into a marriage, he lets Newt travel because he knows it will makes him happy... I just want to hug&kiss him, seriously.
I liked to read about Newt's mum. Previous parts made me think she didn't really care about Newt, so it was surprising - in pleasant way - to read about how she sat with Newt in the hospital for two days and didn't really want to leave him.
And Newt... What was left from my heart from the previous part, broke even more in this when you mentioned how scared he had become of other people. But it was also wonderful to read about his accomplishments - even if he wasn't getting as much recognition as Theseus. And he agreed to write that book - just how nervous he had to be at the thought of being all alone, among strangers, after what had happened to him?
The cherry on top: the mention of Percival! Because that was Percival Theseus thought about (and another point for Thesus for wanting to find husband for Newt in a country, where he would be more free), right? Will Theseus mention marriage before Newt to the States? Will he want to talk about it with Newt first? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN?!!!
Goodness, this story is getting better and better with every part! I wish I could shower you with compliments and chocolate, A!Anon. I love this story and I want to thank you for writing it with my whole heart ♥
Re: FILL [3/?]: Newt/other, eventual Gramander; arranged marriage, past abuse, h/c, learning to trus
I liked to read about Newt's mum. Previous parts made me think she didn't really care about Newt, so it was surprising - in pleasant way - to read about how she sat with Newt in the hospital for two days and didn't really want to leave him.
And Newt... What was left from my heart from the previous part, broke even more in this when you mentioned how scared he had become of other people. But it was also wonderful to read about his accomplishments - even if he wasn't getting as much recognition as Theseus. And he agreed to write that book - just how nervous he had to be at the thought of being all alone, among strangers, after what had happened to him?
The cherry on top: the mention of Percival! Because that was Percival Theseus thought about (and another point for Thesus for wanting to find husband for Newt in a country, where he would be more free), right? Will Theseus mention marriage before Newt to the States? Will he want to talk about it with Newt first? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN?!!!
Goodness, this story is getting better and better with every part! I wish I could shower you with compliments and chocolate, A!Anon. I love this story and I want to thank you for writing it with my whole heart ♥